True Patriots

Clock Day BalladOnce upon that faithful day, Oh, that once upon a time, I discovered Clock Crew Day, And how those bells did chime.Clock Day Ballad
I asked a local what it was, His response gave quite a shock, “Oh silly uneducated dunce. All hail King Strawberryclock!”
“August fifteenth, it began, The meeting of noble folk, Led by the Coolboyman, A.k.a. Strawberryclock”
“For he made the mighty mark, The holy glorious B, That many fools remarked, ‘what a stupid piece of shi-’”
“They all needed a chill pill, The Anti-clocks, glocks, and locks, &nbs
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It's not being harsh/rude/jealous/mean/hateful/whatever if you're actually giving advice to help somebody improve. I wish you people could learn to understand that.
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TI-83
--turtles... who the fuck throws them? geez
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If there is something in your submission that can be critiqued, I will critique it. If there is any way that you can improve, I will tell you how. Focusing on how you can improve is not being harsh, or rude, and if you think so you're an idiot.
i'm scared
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you were laying on the carpet
like you're satin in a coffin.
YOU WIN AT LIFE.
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you were laying on the carpet
like you're satin in a coffin.
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